Is this correct ?

Roopa · 18-03-06, 02:31 AM

Hi frnz,

This is Roopa and i am doing final yr Btech with CSE background.

And i request u to help me in writing career objective. In my resume i

wrote it as :

"To ensure challenging position that utilizes my education and interest in the field of information technology as intended to build a career in innovative software arena."

Is there any mistakes in this , i mean sentence formation or anything else. Or help me in this by giving a new example of career objective.

**sk_kireeti** · 18-03-06, 03:13 AM

Hi Roopa,

The objective which you have stated looks to be good. But, if add some words which also says you are open and eager for new learnings, it will add more value to your statement.

Thanks,
Krishna

winner · 18-03-06, 07:59 AM

also u can say that u like to work as a team since we believe in teamwork.

madmadman · 18-03-06, 01:37 PM

Mixing the to thought from our frnds and mine here is 1

To accept challenges in the dynamic information technology & software world and getting to new highest using my educational knowlegde, teamspirit, talent and the will to learn & fight the worse

i think that was too heavy u can modify it but i tried to caver all aspects the world is changing and the 1st one to witness and bring the change wins remember that bye B O L

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madmadman Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: India Posts: 145 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Rep Power: 4	Mixing the to thought from our frnds and mine here is 1 To accept challenges in the dynamic information technology & software world and getting to new highest using my educational knowlegde, teamspirit, talent and the will to learn & fight the worse i think that was too heavy u can modify it but i tried to caver all aspects the world is changing and the 1st one to witness and bring the change wins remember that bye B O L

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